ext_174490 ([identity profile] boofuls.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] rhyll 2006-02-18 10:58 am (UTC)

I like the first version the best:

A tightrope walker -
I stop to watch a monkey
on a telephone wire

I do not think that it needs
any more readjustment.
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